I'll be revising essay four, my porno Essay. I think, convoluted as it is, it's still far superior to my third essay. One thing I'm going to have to do, though, is some serious free writing. When I wrote my first draft to essay 4, my thoughts weren't completely together, and it really shows.
Things I'm going to have to do:
- Continue to "think" about what my point is, and what kind of message I want to get across. I think I'm almost there for this one.
-Re-evaluate whether the anecdotes and details I've included actually get that message across, and, if not, substitute them for new ones. So far, I think I'm about 50/50 on this.
-Add a first person narrative. It's tough, but it's necessary.
That's about all I can think of right now. What does everyone else think?
Monday, November 30, 2009
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